Thursday, December 6, 2007

6. Parallelism is recurrent syntactical similarity. Several parts of a sentence or several sentences are expressed similarly to show that the ideas in the parts or sentences are equal in importance. Parallelism also adds balance and rhythm and, most importantly, clarity to the sentence.

The article speaks about the Sean Taylor death and how his death is the result of the "Black KKK." The article says black people should be outraged and to stop this by teaching there kids the proper way to act. The author concludes by saying that the “Black KKK” is holding black people back and the "Black KKK" is trying to keep black men in their place — uneducated and outside the mainstream.

The author's main point in the article is that black culture needs to change from having the main aspects of their culture focused on murder, ignorance, and incarceration, and have better values as the main points of their culture. They should be outraged at these murders and stop living with, tolerating, and rationalizing them. The author bring up a valid point because they have poor values in their culture, but then, when the values start to occur in reality and not just in video games, music, movies, TV, etc., they “shift the attention away from the uniquely African-American crisis” and criticize the white media for what they said about Sean Taylor.

The author uses parallelism in this quote "Blame drugs, blame Ronald Reagan, blame George Bush, blame it on the rain or whatever" to strengthen his point that black people need to change black culture and that no matter whom is to blame parents are the ones who need to teach their kids the correct way to act. By listing common sources people use to pass the blame to all in a row, the author uses parallelism to show that these are not really good excuses for the characteristics of black culture. He also shows the need to change it because it has resulted in so many tragic deaths. By using parallelism the author helps add clarity to the sentence because if the author would have said blame anything you want, readers would not have know that you shouldn't really blame anything you want but you should instead teach your child proper morals and help them learn the proper way to act.

3 comments:

Brian Hicks said...

Denelian-
i appreciate your comments, really I do. However, my point was that we ALL need to do something. We've seen what the rap music culture has done to black people. I can't help but wonder, how long until it does the same to the white culture?

JBrandt said...

Denelian, good discussion on the use of parallelism. It's a great syntactical strategy. It's also fun to say syntactical. Oh, and I like the font. It could be a tad bigger but its better than before.
Mr. Brandt

Katie Webb said...

Hey Shilling-

*Glares at the top comment*

Don't let the hater bring you down!!!