My Fellow A.P.Language 11 Blogees
Thursday, January 31, 2008
Larry Elder on Open Minded Liberals
Saturday, January 26, 2008
Worst Movie Ever
Thursday, January 24, 2008
Mr. Brandt, I hope I do this assignment right because it was not on the A.P. Language Blog and I do not really know what the assignment is beyond finding a cartoon and talking about it.
Anyway, Kwame is in some deep trouble now, slightly more than the cartoon suggests. The stains from blackberries representing the text messages that were found between him and Christine Beatty, which could serve as evidence he lied in court under oath that he had not had relationships with her, when in fact the text messages made sexual references, are going to leave a permanent mark on his record. Those text messages and the lies he told could cost him time in prison. The guy saying the blackberries left a permanent stain, as Kwame tries frantically to get the out with sundry cleaners, speaks true to his word as the Mayor of Detroit may have made his final mistake.
Thursday, January 17, 2008
Accumulating Columnists on Audience
The author's main point was that ticket sales for Wings games was down because of poor marketing, not because of economic factors and other money issues. Then he gave ways that Mr. Ilitch could turn around attendance numbers and boost ticket sales.
The author has some good views about the Wings, like, that ticket sales are down for other reasons than the economy, and that to sell out games you must lower ticket and concession prices. He also falsely stated that the Wings need to build a new stadium, perhaps on top of the old Tiger Stadium, which is a horrible idea.
To make this article's audience 8- 11 year old sports fans I would use simpler language that is easier to understand. In the article I would get rid of the use of statistics on how many fans go to games and I would just say that attendance is down. I would also make my points and then prove them using reasons that would make them want to go to the games. When the author says that the Wings must lower ticket prices, I would also include that if ticket prices were lowered they would be able to buy toys with the extra money.